Writing a good hook in educational YouTube videos can literally be the difference between 100 views and a few hundred thousand views. I help others with YouTube strategy, but I also have my own YouTube channel where I got 1M+ views for an educational video on a very specific note-taking software. Here’s a few principles I used when thinking about the hook and video: 1. Is there evidence shown early that you can give someone the outcome they came for? Usually this is early social proof of success, since people use that as a shorthand method of determining how useful something is. For me, I guess my character existence as this hybrid doctor/coder/YouTuber/YouTube strategist can maybe be sufficient social proof to say “I’m indeed a nerd that thinks a lot and has interesting note-taking systems” lol, which is a pretty useful angle for note-taking software. I think that leads to another interesting component of, it’s not just what you’ve done, but it’s what character you portray that lets people understand whether your educational piece is truly going to be helpful or not. By character, I don’t mean some fake persona of who you might be of course. But I do tell people what’s on my mind and who I am, because it gives them that context to understand how I can be helpful to them. 2. Amplitude of value. This is why videos like “do more in 1 week than other people do in 9 months” are broadly appealing concepts — because they’re demonstrated as so ridiculously valuable that they both invoke curiosity AND prompt a feeling of reward even before the person has even actually checked out the content. Not that this ever happens in real life, but it would be like stumbling upon a gigantic unopened treasure chest. In my particular case, i just emphasised that I spent a ridiculous number of hours making a $97 course that i decided to re-release for free instead. I had the thought process of “I’ll make this the absolute best course ever” and it did take months. Even now, I think its longevity is because it’s truly valuable and it took so much effort that it has its own little moat. 3. Be specific. Generic advice is often cheap, even if it’s true. I think it’s important to get the importance of “what to do” and “how to do it” right, which takes time and practice. In the case of my note-taking video, one way I think this applied was because I was demonstrating everything in the software itself. I didn’t really care about retention all that much when people got into the tutorial; I was just focusing on helping people step-by-step with very concrete examples. 4. Foreshadowing/signalling is really, really important. Those opening 20-30 seconds have to really convince someone your big educational video is worth watching, because you generally won’t be able to as easily use entertainment retention techniques like open loops or strong visuals or a protagonist facing increasing conflicts. The key mistake here is when people think “I’ve got to get into my content as quickly as possible”. Which is true in some senses, but convincing someone to stay first is really going to be the first real hurdle that needs to be overcome. Some people go extra hard on foreshadowing and almost have a full minute of it, but that’s probably overkill. In my case, I just quickly flashed a screenshot of the table of contents, which was like 10 different areas of stuff. People can also see from the chapters that it’s insanely comprehensive. Chapters are probably bad for retention too (they encourage active viewing rather than passive viewing), but it didn’t matter. Retention is important of course, but I would prioritise a good experience above superficial tactics.
Specific hook strategies from a 1M+ view educational video I made

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